There’s something wrong but I don’t know
This pain is buried deep and low
And now the more I give
The less I get
Don’t know how to deal with
all of this
There’s this cold that’s seeping through
It clings to me like kindergarten glue
So please just take my hand
I need a heart that understands
And now I feel like I’m falling apart
Not exactly sure where to restart
Where to restart
Please help me find myself again
Cause I’m not sure where to begin
Can’t you see that you broke my heart
Broke my heart
And I’m not sure how to restart
So where do I start?
You see everything reminds me of you
Not sure how or what to do
I once thought you were the world
But now my head it starts to swirl
Remembering the promises we swore
But you’re not even around anymore
oh you burned me to the core
So now I guess this is the end
Three years of just pretend
I swear your eyes they looked so true
Every time I smiled right back at you
And I don’t know what to do
With these memories of you
And now I feel like I’m falling apart
Not exactly sure where to restart
Where to restart
Please help me find myself again
Cause I’m not sure where to begin
Can’t you see that you broke my heart
Broke my heart
And I’m not sure how to restart
So where do I start?
So now the ocean makes me break
It seems more than I can take
And I scream your name into the sky
And wipe the tear right from my eye
oh it feels like I’m dying
Feels like im dying
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| SirichJ | Posted: 2010/2/9 6:49 Updated: 2010/2/9 6:49 |
Poetry is my existance ![]() ![]() Joined: 2004/8/27 From: England, UK Posts: 2777 |
Your kindergarten glue must have been stronger than mine then because you couldn't even stick 2 bits of paper together with it lol, I liked the circular motion of the poem going round and round re-asking the same things which shows the torment you're feeling and never being able to move forward because you're stuck on the roundabout of sadness, nice to see you posting poems like this, but not in the way that you're feeling :)
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| Intelligent Design | Posted: 2010/2/8 18:50 Updated: 2010/2/8 18:50 |
![]() ![]() Joined: 2004/11/29 From: --->Inside of the machine, same as you. But unlike most I'm not asleep... These BLASTED CONTROLS! Posts: 822 |
Ah, yes! Glad you showed me this. I do see a bit of "Sharp Knife" in the tone of this...
You know my favorite part of that song? "How'd I get knocked so loose? Someone I swear I'll never be Who trades his dreams for security Walks this city blindly Lately it's getting hard for me to see And it's all disappearing and it all falls apart And it seems like the ending is a lot like the start" This is a great inspiration piece you have here, Krissy. Thanks so much for sharing. Team E.C.H.O. "Excellence in Commenting with a Health Objective." |
| dancingbear9296 | Posted: 2010/2/8 18:25 Updated: 2010/2/8 18:25 |
![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/11/1 From: becoming a student of life Posts: 837 |
Extremely powerful pen and at least from my nightmares it's totally relatable. I hope you will be able to find yourself again and figure out where to go from here.
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