*Misc : Cancel The Emotions
cancel the emotions,
take the pain,
controlling your heart,
is like choosing when it rains.
break the bondage,
of anger and lust,
cancel the hate,
life can be just.
destroy the wicked,
the politics and scum,
cancel the lies,
the world becomes one.
begin to love ,
share your heart,
cancel the restrictions,
experience cupids dart.
staying faithful,
through lust and temptation,
cancel the mistrust,
enjoy procreation. 
arguments ensue,
where were you last night,
cancel the relationship,
your biggest fright.
a futile venture,
into the sea of despair,
one love canceled,
left a heart in repair.
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| Brownie | Posted: 2010/2/8 15:04 Updated: 2010/2/8 15:04 |
New and fancy free   Joined: 2010/1/28 From: Posts: 30 |
 Re: Cancel The EmotionsI disagree with how you compared "controlling your heart" to "choosing when it rains." I thinks it's very possible to choose who you fall in love with. Don't you choose what to think about? Don't you choose who to hang out with? If you're not thinking about a person or spending time with them, how would you fall for them? Difference aside, it's very nicely written. And I understand that ending a relationship can be a good thing for an individual to do.
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| Blooper_Reel | Posted: 2010/2/8 15:00 Updated: 2010/2/8 15:00 |
Me!? Quiet!? HA!   Joined: 2007/5/15 From: tom-ball Posts: 78 |
Re: Cancel The Emotions thanks =D
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| Sapphire__Eyes | Posted: 2010/2/8 10:09 Updated: 2010/2/8 10:09 |
Poetry is my existance   Joined: 2006/4/4 From: Just trying to get by, where ever that may be. Posts: 2195 |
Re: Cancel The Emotions Damn boy. Differences aside, this was amazingly written. I really like it, particularly the last stanza.
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| SirichJ | Posted: 2010/2/8 7:36 Updated: 2010/2/8 7:36 |
Poetry is my existance  Joined: 2004/8/27 From: England, UK Posts: 2777 |
Re: Cancel The Emotions I think the 3rd verse is very relevant at present!
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| dancingbear9296 | Posted: 2010/2/8 1:03 Updated: 2010/2/8 1:03 |
 Joined: 2007/11/1 From: becoming a student of life Posts: 837 |
Re: Cancel The Emotions I really like the first stanza.
It does seem that controlling one's true feeling can be very hard. Loved the write  |