*Misc : Lost
The mask that you are wearing
Just isn't you
I know you're different
Why doesn't it show?
Thoughts racing
About what your friends will think
I know they are your friends
But they really stink
They laugh at you
Because of how
Someone else feels
And you give in to them... wow
Why not
Follow your heart
I promise it won't ache
I won't let it brake
You got to shake
Off those feelings
Don't make me wait
While you are shaking
In the corner
When your place is in the center
It's too late
You missed your chance
The feeling won't return
You will never know
What could have bee
If you couldn't be you then...
Maybe you weren't worth the tears in the first place
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| dancingbear9296 | Posted: 2010/2/10 12:39 Updated: 2010/2/10 12:39 |
  Joined: 2007/11/1 From: becoming a student of life Posts: 837 |
 Re: Lostthanks meg :)
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| guitarmonkey | Posted: 2010/2/10 12:22 Updated: 2010/2/10 12:22 |
Poetry is my existance   Joined: 2006/3/20 From: behind the door. Posts: 2308 |
Re: Lost I like the images you show in this. minus the mistakes over all a very well written piece.
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| dancingbear9296 | Posted: 2010/2/8 18:14 Updated: 2010/2/8 18:14 |
Joined: 2007/11/1 From: becoming a student of life Posts: 837 |
Re: Lost SirichJ found one of my accidental mistakes and I found another (probably because i was typing so hastily at 2 am)
"What could have bee" is supposed to have an "n" at the end |
| dancingbear9296 | Posted: 2010/2/8 18:10 Updated: 2010/2/8 18:12 |
Joined: 2007/11/1 From: becoming a student of life Posts: 837 |
Re: Lost Blooper_Reel: Thanks
 SirichJ: Thank you for noticing my mistake haha Saphire_Eyes: If you read this thinking it's kyle... it's not |
| Sapphire__Eyes | Posted: 2010/2/8 10:07 Updated: 2010/2/8 10:07 |
Poetry is my existance  Joined: 2006/4/4 From: Just trying to get by, where ever that may be. Posts: 2195 |
Re: Lost Totally loved this when I read it on your iTouch, and I like it now too haha
It sucks that you feel like this, and that the person you are writing about does this. And ya know Si is right, most people dont live up to our expectations. |
| SirichJ | Posted: 2010/2/8 7:38 Updated: 2010/2/8 7:38 |
Poetry is my existance  Joined: 2004/8/27 From: England, UK Posts: 2777 |
Re: Lost (Brake should be break) ;) I'm sad that you're writing this way again lately, most people never live up to your expectations of them sadly. I hope things get better :)
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| Blooper_Reel | Posted: 2010/2/8 1:03 Updated: 2010/2/8 1:03 |
Me!? Quiet!? HA!   Joined: 2007/5/15 From: tom-ball Posts: 78 |
Re: Lost good choices of words to create an image
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