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| ivory | Posted: 2010/2/9 1:24 Updated: 2010/2/9 1:24 |
Just can't stay away   Joined: 2007/4/23 From: Posts: 98 |
 Re: EditedOHHHH what did i miss???
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| blissfulmami | Posted: 2010/2/6 20:37 Updated: 2010/2/6 20:37 |
Why go anywhere else?   Joined: 2007/8/25 From: USA north east Posts: 374 |
Re: Edited I am very sorry for your loss as reflected in your write. Your emotion was rawly expressed. Healing is a process and with time you will be able to overcome this. My prayers are with you.
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| Lillygirl | Posted: 2010/2/4 8:01 Updated: 2010/2/4 8:01 |
Why go anywhere else?  Joined: 2007/1/8 From: MIDWEST USA!!! Posts: 499 |
Re: Cause and Effect Thanks Simon, I was a little uncomfortable with rhyming, like I told you, but I tried!
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| SirichJ | Posted: 2010/2/4 6:53 Updated: 2010/2/4 6:53 |
Poetry is my existance   Joined: 2004/8/27 From: England, UK Posts: 2777 |
Re: Cause and Effect I think this style of writing suits you just as well as the free verse. You still convey the message very clearly, I like the on-off rhyming running through it and you still chose your words carefully as you do in your other work. I dont think anyone could imagine how horrible things must have been and continue to be reliving them through your dreams. I hope you can move forward one day and have some closure on all of this :)
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