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Love/Romance : The Reason Was You
Posted by cyanide_dreams on 2007/1/4 3:14:09 (170 reads)

I was falling into you,
as if serenity were the blues.
There was no tower to climb higher,
in the modern, romance-novel, love-scripture
where we seldom hold out to choose

My stoic, crossbarred-heart gate
was strong in fidelity to self.
Your glance pierced my armour, chest plate,
storming the walls
to propigate my heart rate.

It was better...

than sublimity could be,
for your presence,
or even a simple reflection,
thawed the frosted walls of
my mind's avant-garde, panic room,
where I'd hide in paralyzed purity.

It was the lessons...

in which we learned along the way.
It was more than holding out
to the dissapating, American, love story.
Our free-will expression
was the the blade that cut my chains.
Without knowing, you granted my mind
the will to run free again.

It was our lucid verbal intercourse,
and the way we could pantomime
one-another's genetic design,
which I attained the means
to communicate the reason to the rhyme...

The reason was you.

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GoliathAssassin
Posted: 2010/1/4 18:33  Updated: 2010/1/4 18:33
Poetry is my existance
Joined: 2006/3/30
From: Detroit, Michigan. Left behind... Hickory and 8 mile for the suburban grind...
Posts: 2200
 Re: The Reason Was You
Wow... it's writes like this that make me realize how much of a kindred spirit is at the heart of our muses, Adam. You deal with your thoughts one way, and I deal with mine in another... but every so-often, you write something that speaks so familiarly to me... I don't believe this was the first, and I don't believe it will be the last.

Here's to letting the mind run free...
From the panic room of paralyzed purity...
And to the women who help make that possible!

Thanks, Adam. This has looong deserved a comment.



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