Love/Romance : Tired Nights Are Endless.
A night of smoke and myself concluded.
All thats left is the urge to write something that matters.
Something that will heal all wounds.
Something to grip the moment and etch it in stone.
Something to remind us all about the things we love or hate.
Something to help induce sleep.
All I have is the urge to write something that matters....
Without success.
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| suspect | Posted: 2008/11/30 12:34 Updated: 2008/11/30 12:34 |
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It'd be great to write something that matters.Something that could affect so many in a powerful way.A poem someone did might not get the true recognition it deserves until the poet has long been dead.
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| Retribution101 | Posted: 2008/11/30 8:50 Updated: 2008/11/30 8:50 |
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Absolutely excellent capture of not only the responsibility we feel as "the voices" of the world, but also a great introspective look at a need for resolution and the extreme desire to make a difference.
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| AJ Strong | Posted: 2006/8/28 4:02 Updated: 2006/8/28 4:02 |
Poetry is my existance ![]() ![]() Joined: 2005/2/7 From: Bloomington Indiana Posts: 2083 |
Damn!
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| BlackOrchid | Posted: 2006/2/17 14:08 Updated: 2006/2/17 14:08 |
Poetry is my existance ![]() ![]() Joined: 2004/8/30 From: Tennessee Posts: 2050 |
well i loved it
you captured the feeling of creativeness trying to escape. great!!!!!!!! norma |
| Gabriel | Posted: 2006/2/17 10:02 Updated: 2006/2/17 10:02 |
Why go anywhere else? ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/2/11 From: somewhere bettween here and there Posts: 171 |
You captured what it is to what to write something that matters. And it matters because every idea shared is an inspiration waiting to happen. Good write.
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